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Blood Brothers - Introduction

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BLOOD BROTHERS

A wordless, film noir-style manga.
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If you could search through my gallery, you'll eventually find the 8 pages of Blood Brothers. ;)
Enjoy!
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Critique as requested.

Again, a very well done piece! You show a great ability to draw! I love the intensity of this piece, very dragonball inspired! The composition is fairly well done, although the balance between background and colors is not the best. Because of the white skin and white background, there is nothing to "pop" the character out from the background, *especially* because of the horizontal lines on the right side of this piece. The lines do add a somewhat modern look and feel to the image, but ultimately, due to lack of space, end up confusing the image when viewed at first glance. Perhaps a soft grey for the background would have fixed this issue, or solid black with white lettering. Now, that being said, I must mention that this is NOT a big deal whatsover. The piece is very well done and it does not take long for the viewer's eye to easily distinguish the character, even though it is harsh on the eye. I mainly bring this up because noir comics are meant to be easy on the eyes with their expert uses of black and whites to help the viewer's eye "flow" over the page.

Great work! You have an excellent mastery of the pen style and I am amazed at your ability!